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Soldiers of Fortune Arc Episode Three

Posted in Uncategorized by jamesdanielfluker on December 7, 2010
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TO BE CONTINUED 12/14!

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  1. Candy said,

    Hey James,

    This is really good. Dialogue is hard, but you do it very well.

    The only suggestion I would make is that you need some emotional reactions from the characters, especially with the last death.It seems a little rushed.

    Keep up the good work!!!!

    Best,
    Candy


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